想了ㄧ整晚，既要合義 有意境 押韻 一語雙關，還要隱晦不致露骨，故用blowing和fighting(為韻及臨場感加ing)，請賜教:

No matter where, when, how long ,and who sleep in spring,
Only the birds song let you know and feel that of dawning.
Vaguely remember the sound of all night rain and blowing,
I wonder how many blossoms alight through the fighting.

Thank you. That’s very kind of you.

抱歉! 心思都放到了松濤兄的"春曉", 遲至今日才回覆!